Conversation Between Dr_BuzzCzar and fbn

Thank you for the compliment! I will post the next installment, after I checked it for obvious mistakes. What part of the story appealed to you? (if there was any).
Thanks again for your input.

Yes, I think you should proceed with your story. I'm even more impressed knowing that English is not your primary language. Good luck.

Thank you for your review! (holiday to britain story). Sorry for posting this here but I get an error if I try to post an 'answer' to your review. I've just started writing, and English isn't my first language. It is the first review and I am happy with it! I will try to correct the mistakes. Do you think it will be worth it to publish the rest of the story?
thanks