The story you linked had a rating of 8/10 when I looked, so... maybe your decision to pick up and leave was a little hasty? You asked for feedback and then got defensive when it was given. No writer should ever write without a good editor and expect their works to be flawless; I don't care if you're the Bard himself. Other than Austerus' comment on a bad day (what an absolutely beautiful apology, though!), your feedback in this thread is all constructive. That's exactly what you should be looking for in feedback, both in reviews and in editing. I don't know if you'll come back and read this, but I hope you do. I'm sensitive to criticism too, and I expect that sharing the story I'm currently working on will be hard, and I'll want to defend my "artistic" choices, but I will do my best not to give up, regardless. If you enjoy writing, then continue to write! If you don't want to change a thing, then don't! But don't ask for criticism and get offended when it is given. Either way, I hope you do well.